Mrs D

The 2 draft of the storyboard is much better. Well done. More shot variation. The start is better and the pace is good. I would use a slower fade at the end though and why do you have a CU of the skates and of the hands when it says ‘Mind’? Have a look at when you are using CU and link to the lyrics. Also half way through it looks like you have just looped the images rather than thought about the message they give when joined with the lyrics. Be aware of this when constructing.