Results from Audience Feedback

Although I asked over 20 young adults to get back to me and give me feedback for my music promo, this is all I have received so far:

"Wow Olivia! This is really good!! I love the style of it all and the Mes en Scene, it looks really believable and professional. :) The colours in the skatepark are great too. I think you've filmed it all really well and the story is nice and clear. I think it's great the way it is, maybe make a couple of small changes like singing being out of time at the beginning and it was a bit juddery at times. Your album and advert are really impressive too, they look super professional and I love the pictures you have used throughout it."

"Your album looks so good! I love the main image on the front I think it works really well with the music video!The narrative is brilliant, I think you've done a really good job because it's nice and clear :) the skating also adds to the storyline by making it a bit more unique and interesting. As romantic music videos can sometimes be very boring! The skating works really well with it though and makes it more boy friendly. My favourite thing about your music video would be Robs [the main artists] singing!! It's actually very professional and looks so believable. Well done :)"

"Your music video and print work work really well.One thing that you could improve on was the shot of the new boy smiling near the end of the music video. I think he looks really awkward :( but the idea of her cheating and being with someone else is great because it works well with the lyrics so I would still use the idea just change that tiny bit. I like the locations which you have filmed in, the business park is really interesting and unique as I would never have thought to film in such a place but I think it really works within your music video."

"I think you've done a fantastic job in terms of matching the story to the lyrics. All of the song works well with what you're seeing :) like when the lyrics of "She had a lover" play and you have shown her phone with a text from another boy which works well! And in other parts of the song where there is no singing, just instrumental you have included less acting and just shown shots of the scenery for example I  think the shot in the underpass where you've used a special lens looks fantastic. My only negative would be that some of the shots are a bit shakey and maybe need going over :) The print work you've done looks brilliant, you've done a great job making that look really professional. If I saw that being advertised in a magazine I would definitely stop to read it."

"I bet Rob loved being your singer! He's actually done such a good job haha I'm really surprised!! Well done both of you :) My favourite thing would probably be the use of different camera angles you have used, as it look way more professional than if you were to just film all of it handheld. I'm guessing you used a tripod for most of it and that has really paid off. I loved the fisheye lens effect, it really made an impact in certain scenes and gave it that extra something! I also like the use of blur you have used and you've done a great job with editing as it looks really profesh! Very proud of you for this, it looks amazing!"

"You've done a good job with filming and I like the storyline but have some issues with the editing. His singing it slightly out of time at times, which you need to correct. As well as this, certain aspects don't flow for example when you're (the girl) waiting for the second boy under the archway, the video shows a quick clip of you standing up and then it goes back to a clip of you sitting down again. Just little things like that are things you need to touch up. Another thing I thought could be improved was the clip of Rob skating after you at the beginning. As it dissolves to him going round a corner and then takes awhile for him to come back into shot, so I would sort that out as well. Overall though it's really great just thought I would help you improve it a little."